just english text corrections

cacti/cacti.spec

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Distribution: OpenPKG [EVAL]
 Group:        Database
 License:      GPL
 Version:      0.8.4
-Release:      20031117
+Release:      20031205
 
 #   list of sources
 Source0:      http://www.raxnet.net/downloads/cacti-%{version}.tar.gz
@@ -55,13 +55,12 @@ AutoReq:      no
 AutoReqProv:  no
 
 %description
-    Cacti is a complete frontend to RRDTool, it stores all of the
-    necessary information to create graphs and populate them with data
-    in a MySQL database. The frontend is completely PHP driven. Along
-    with being able to maintain Graphs, Data Sources, and Round Robin
-    Archives in a database, Cacti handles the data gathering. There is
-    also SNMP support for those used to creating traffic graphs with
-    MRTG.
+    Cacti is a complete PHP-driven frontend to RRDTool. It stores all
+    of the necessary information to create graphs and populate them
+    with data in a MySQL database. Along with being able to maintain
+    Graphs, Data Sources, and Round Robin Archives in a database,
+    Cacti handles the data gathering as well. There is also SNMP
+    support for those used to creating traffic graphs with MRTG.
 
 %prep
     %setup -q
@@ -164,32 +163,31 @@ AutoReqProv:  no
 %post
     if [ $1 -eq 1 ]; then
         #   display final hints on initial installation
-        ( echo "1. To complete installation of the Cacti package please you have"
-          echo "   start MySQL and setup the initial Cacti database. For this run"
-          echo "   the following commands:"
+        ( echo "1. To complete this installation of Cacti please start MySQL and"
+          echo "   initialize the Cacti database like this:"
           echo "     \$ $RPM_INSTALL_PREFIX/etc/rc mysql start"
           echo "     \$ $RPM_INSTALL_PREFIX/sbin/cacti-setup"
           echo ""
-          echo "2. Cacti by default is run by the OpenPKG cron jobs every 15"
-          echo "   minutes only. Usually Cacti wants to run every 5 minutes for"
-          echo "   more granular data gathering. For this set:"
+          echo "2. By default, Cacti is run by the OpenPKG cron jobs only every"
+          echo "   15 minutes. To run Cacti every 5 minutes for more granular"
+          echo "   data gathering, set this variable:"
           echo "     # $RPM_INSTALL_PREFIX/etc/rc.conf:"
           echo "     cacti_cron=\"no\""
-          echo "   and setup a cronjob for user %{l_rusr}"
+          echo "   and insert a new cronjob for user %{l_rusr}"
           echo "     # system crontab:"
           echo "     */5 * * * * %{l_rusr} $RPM_INSTALL_PREFIX/sbin/cacti-cron"
           echo ""
-          echo "3. Cacti by default is running with an own Apache server on"
-          echo "   IPv4 address 127.0.0.1, TCP port 8080. Please change this"
-          echo "   by editing the \"Port 8080\" and \"Listen 127.0.0.1:8080\""
-          echo "   directives in $RPM_INSTALL_PREFIX/etc/cacti/cacti-apache.conf"
+          echo "3. By default, Cacti runs its own Apache server on IPv4 address"
+          echo "   127.0.0.1, TCP port 8080. Please change this by editing the"
+          echo "   \"Port 8080\" and \"Listen 127.0.0.1:8080\" directives in"
+          echo "   $RPM_INSTALL_PREFIX/etc/cacti/cacti-apache.conf"
           echo ""
-          echo "4. After this post-installation steps, startup Cacti by running"
+          echo "4. After this postinstallation, start Cacti by running"
           echo "     \$ $RPM_INSTALL_PREFIX/etc/rc cacti start"
-          echo "   and connecting with your browser to:"
+          echo "   and connect with a browser to:"
           echo "     http://127.0.0.1:8080/"
-          echo "   Then proceed Cacti's initial configuration dialog. Then login"
-          echo "   as 'admin' (with initial password 'admin') and change the"
+          echo "   Follow Cacti's initial configuration dialogs, and then login"
+          echo "   as 'admin' (with initial password 'admin') to change the"
           echo "   password to a custom one."
         ) | %{l_rpmtool} msg -b -t notice
     fi